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Day Twenty Seven

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Her skin glowed with such a spectacular radiance once, but Not today.
The perfect figure was curled up into a tight ball, seconds from sleep.
Pretty blue eyes aluminated the room when she opened them every few minutes.
They lit the trail of tears that crossed over the skin of her cheeks.
It had been a year that they had been together as of today.
He wasn't there though. He would be gone for another five hundred days or so.
She didn't know how many exactly.
She winced at the thought of the number, tears spilling from the pools in her eyes.
Every now and then, she would press her face into the jacket she clutched in her hands.
It was his. He'd given it to her before she left.
She breathed in his smell holding the jacket tightly in her grasp.
She hated him for leaving her alone.
She needed him so much.
There should be two bodies in this bed, not one.
The black sheet hung perfectly over her skin, hugging her.
It wouldn't be long before she drifted off into a slumber.
She was only moments of being away from Day Twenty Seven.
This is one is how I felt the second day away from Panda. I curled up with his jacket and tried to sleep.

Please tell me how I can make the visualization better.

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Introduction
Day One
Day Three
Day Twelve
Day Thirteen
Day Twenty Seven

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I've been wearing his jacket alot since he went--  It smells of him---that strong, musty scent.  It smells of cologne, long forgotten since then,  But there's other smells, too, from places he's been.  
It smells of the subway and cigarette smoke,  
There's a stain on the sleeve from spilled Pepsi Coke.  There are other stains too from God knows what,  And a chewed through pocket (he loved that mutt).  The inside is plaid, a bit out of style,  
But his tacky old habits still bring me a smile.  
This apartment is quiet without him near,  And though Heaven is far, it's like he's still here.
I Miss Tha Romance...   
Yeah...   
Telling it like a story  Baby Girl, sit down for a spell  Hope this can make things go so well   
Doing this straight out solo  My motto busting away  All through today  Trying to make things right   
Dreamy, Dreamy bright  Tha hikari is shining me  So let my vision make you see   
I'm just a friend, a friend  That's all I'm going to hear and probably be for others  Hoping someone can realize beyond this boundary line   
Tha Caster of a Rhyme Master  DDZ doesn't want to stand by anymore  Baby G
Melting in my gloom  I sit alone in this room  So empty like a hole  Reflects my inner soul  Empty of emotion  Needing of devotion  Can't see past my covered eyes   
I'm feeling..  
Nothing  Hurt and surrendering  Mood unchanged  Life deranged  Facade of blank expressions  Everyday depressions  Untrusting, lost of all allies   
You...  
Wouldn't understand  You didn't even try  But I gave it my best  So just give it a rest  Leave me in turmoil, prone  Just leave me here alone  To let me heal  To let this emptiness, unre
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KJ-Illustration's avatar
Absolutely beautiful :heart: I loved this! :hug: